Hehe, I rather like this one.

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Hehe, I rather like this one.

Discussion in 'The Lounge' started by darkone, Jun 6, 2009.

  1. darkone

    darkone Moderator

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    Embrace.

    Eyes meet,
    lips lock.
    Hands held,
    arms curled.

    Entwine...

    In darkness,
    cuddles.
    In light,
    looks.

    Encircle...

    Hearts beating,
    against time.
    Breath matched,
    in instance.

    Enfold...

    Minds thinking,
    of the other.
    Cores yearning,
    for the moment.

    Embrace...

    Just finished it, what you think?
     
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    Uh, cool <3
     
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  3. EatMeReturns

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    I love these moments. Reminds me of all today... :( stupid today had to end...
    8/10!!! Biased because I'm obsessed with rhyme.
     
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    *wonders what the poem threads in the arts section are for*
     
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    thats surprisingly good
    and that is comic from someone who knows five people who published Poem albums
     
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    Thanks guys.

    EMR lol, what if it rhymed?

    Ovvie, it is in the poems thread too, but it was edited in. So I don't get extra mins for it.

    Thanks drie.
     
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    darkone, Jun 7, 2009
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