Life

Discussion in 'The Lounge' started by Fenix, Jun 19, 2009.

Life

Discussion in 'The Lounge' started by Fenix, Jun 19, 2009.

  1. Fenix

    Fenix Moderator

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    A crust of bread and a corner to sleep in,
    A minute to smile and an hour to weep in,
    A pint of joy to a peck of trouble,
    And never a laugh but the moans come double;
    And that is life!
     
    Fenix, Jun 19, 2009
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  2. Darth_Bane

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    Indeed nice poem. Thanks for sharing!
     
    Darth_Bane, Jun 19, 2009
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  3. Fenix

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    A friend of mine thought the 4th line sounded dirty.

    I told her she was a perv.

    :|
     
    Fenix, Jun 19, 2009
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    Lol.
     
    sniper64, Jun 19, 2009
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    I liked it, even though im not a patron of poems. :yes:
     
    Dragon God, Jun 19, 2009
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  6. Darth_Bane

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    And yes the fourth line IS dirty, replace moans with sighs or something similar
     
    Darth_Bane, Jun 19, 2009
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    It's only dirty if your mind is
     
    Meee, Jun 19, 2009
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  8. Kaaraa

    Kaaraa Space Junkie

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    WHAR MAH NAZI WAR STOREH.


    I kid. Great poem, Fenix :)
     
    Kaaraa, Jun 19, 2009
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  9. Fenix

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    Nazi? It's Soviet boy.
     
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  10. Kaaraa

    Kaaraa Space Junkie

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    Excuses, excuses. ;)
     
    Kaaraa, Jun 19, 2009
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  11. Fenix

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    OH now I get waht you mean.

    I've been putting it off, cause...
     
    Fenix, Jun 19, 2009
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