"Hey..My name is Ethan Fransisco, As a boy I alway...wanted to go into the Rhino Squad.... Guess what happened to me..?" "No...not the Rhino Squad....I got put into the Spec Ops, "The thing is...never mind...I guess things just happen... Right now..Im deployed in a Dropship.. With a bunch of Marines.." "I've got The standard Ghost Mask...AC-line 4985...The rest are just Stealth Shoulders...Stealth Chest..etc, I am getting deployed on the front-line." [Ima line stealer ] "...Hell its about time..." MARINE coming soon
I'd tell you to move this to The Arts section, but I would suggest you beef up the grammar first. Good background though... maybe a bit more voice in it, too!
atleast he doesnt put it in sc2 discussion...which most cannonfodder do. welcome to the forums btw. =]