Re: 6) The Last Ones Standing

I have the feeling this is beyond 2000 words. But very well written, you have my vote.

 

The limit was capped at 3000 and 2000 was recommended, also, I did enjoy this piece. It will be getting one of my three votes. :thumbup:

 

I enjoyed reading this. Very good.

 

whoa this is a long story, but it's good nevertheless

 

Hmm, a couple of typos, but more description and narrative than dialogue (e.g. it's literary rather than cinematic as so much of video game lore tends to be). This one gets a vote...

 

well done - interesting themes, good action and tension... got one of my votes

liked the way you included thoughts like this:

 

Nicely done.
I have only 2 more stories to read and thus far you have captured a story character the best.
I liked the technical bits to the writing, you may have the makings of a fine sci-fi writer.

Not my absolute favorite, but I think it's gonna get a vote none the less.

 

Very nicely done, I have absolutely no complaints. An exciting, long read and I never lost interest. I liked Almajid's thoughts, they're what made this story even more interesting for me. I also liked the bit about the battlecruiser - that it's Minotaur class and it's weakness of plasma wires and such. Really good work, I can't complain about anything. You got one of my votes.

 

very very well done!