Re: 7) Ghost: Intercepted

Discussion in 'The Arts' started by josh, Oct 11, 2007.

Re: 7) Ghost: Intercepted

Discussion in 'The Arts' started by josh, Oct 11, 2007.

  1. josh

    josh New Member

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    Very highly accurate, however, the story went so fast although it's understandable. Worth a vote.
     
    josh, Oct 11, 2007
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    yeah this is a very fast paced story, but i think it's pretty good
     
    BnechbReaker, Oct 11, 2007
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  3. NateSMZ

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    Interesting story... the plot seemed to move too quickly in parts - and by that I mean, in your head you prolly had the whole tale imagined, but we don't have access to all that info - so in parts it felt like you left things out without even realizing it
     
    NateSMZ, Oct 16, 2007
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    Poorly written.

    Boring read.

    Doesn't make much sense.

    Sorry as I go through these I'm just being blunt with the ones I don't feel have anything of merit.
     
    BloodHawk, Oct 19, 2007
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    The story itself isn't bad, but the language and structure ruins it all. Sorry, it's just not fun reading it because of that.
     
    Patuljak, Oct 20, 2007
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