well written... I thought the quality of writing was actually better than most others I've read... just wasn't too interesting to me, is all - different strokes an all that - but good job
More so goofy and awkward than humorous. I like how you chose to write about the life of an average Terran, but that's about all I liked.
Yeah, it's goofy, but I think it's a good story. I had fun reading it and the theme is very cool, but it's not enough to get a vote. Good effort though!
it was for another competition where i had to use the given first sentence and last sentence, and that's what i came up with.
