Time for another one.

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Time for another one.

Discussion in 'The Lounge' started by darkone, Jun 9, 2009.

  1. darkone

    darkone Moderator

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    Promise.

    Heart has,
    been lonely.
    Mind has,
    always been alone.

    Mind pledges to Heart...

    Heart,
    needs someone,
    it's clear.

    Mind swears to Heart...

    Mind,
    want someone,
    it's obvious.

    Mind vows to Heart...

    Mind,
    will be that someone.
    Heart,
    must let it be.

    Mind declares to Heart...

    Can Heart,
    feel it?
    May Mind,
    give it?

    Promise.

    So?
     
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    darkone, Jun 9, 2009
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    sniper64 New Member

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    A little repetetive, but I liked it.
     
    sniper64, Jun 9, 2009
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  3. LoVeRBoy[E]

    LoVeRBoy[E] New Member

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    Ugg, it's ok but more of a rap person. I don't think I've had my neck suked in a while darkone, would you do the honors?
     
    LoVeRBoy[E], Jun 9, 2009
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    I actually liked that one very much. For my english exams I am looking at the old conflict between romance and sense ;)
     
    furrer, Jun 9, 2009
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  5. darkone

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    Thanks.

    Feel free to show your teacher. If you take credit though, I will kill you.
     
    darkone, Jun 10, 2009
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    Thats not the way it works though...
     
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  7. darkone

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    Åh, jeg forstår.

    Was just saying feel free to show it off.
     
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    I know, you deserve it at least.
     
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  9. darkone

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    Lol.

    Thanks but you don't have to, would be kind of odd if, you just said, "Hei everyone, look what my American friend wrote.".
     
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    Yeah ;) But I didnt think they would be surprised :D
     
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  11. darkone

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    What you mean?
     
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    That my schoolmates/teacher wouldnt be surprised if i suddenly said:

    listen listen, look at this which my internet friend darkone wrote, its great.

    lol
     
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  13. darkone

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    Meaning that you're random like that?
     
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    a bit yes

    but i won the discussen that chess is a sport at the end. 2 years you know...
     
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    Åh, jeg forstår.

    Hva? Here at the forums?

    Off question, is jeg supposed to be capped whether it is at the beginning of the sentence or not?
     
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    no in class.

    there isnt anything special with jeg!? examples!?:

    Jeg hedder Christian.

    han hedder Jens, og jeg hedder Christian. Hvad hedder jeg?
     
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  17. darkone

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    I see I see.

    Navnet ditt er Chirstian?

    Jens, hvem?
     
    darkone, Jun 10, 2009
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    Ja

    Jens var bare et fiktivt navn

    Jens was just a fictiv name
     
    furrer, Jun 10, 2009
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  19. darkone

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    Åh.

    Jeg heter Roman.

    Hyggelig å møte deg. Lol.
     
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    :) ikke som om det er første gang vi møder hinanden ;)
     
    furrer, Jun 11, 2009
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